combatplayer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<MWA> Within Your Soul (vocal)]

hmm. good..

feals like the track is a lil underpowered. normaly i can feal the bass in the floor when im listening to hard genras like u use here but its like the deeper bass tones are missing. theres a bass in the brek 2:50 that uses a bass which i the only bass i cn spot in this track that goesa ll the way down. but also that i had to turn the sub all the way up to to hear it.. i get that the kick maybe isnt meant to be hard. but still would want a deep bassline to keep the rythm solid even for deaf people lol. except for my own needs for hard rythms then i think this is awesome. i like the way u get the lyricks into it and so on. my only complain is the over all bass.

mjattie responds:

underpowered/overpowered. It's just what you want to hear. I'm not sure I want it more powered, because I'll like it less. :P Overall lacking of bass, is true, but I'm not sure how to fix it... yet.

[<MWA> Losing Grip]

very very good

i find the hats in the start too sharp. i know they might be meant for that. but i think the result would be better if u turned them a little down plus made them more soft, perhaps with a reverb wuth very very little dry output increasing as it goes and increased the volume slowly towards start along with hardness would also be kinda cool. maybe u could really do allot my just turning the attack rate a tiny little bit down and then turning it back up at drum intruduction. except fort the hats i dont think theres anything else i noticed like that..its an awesome track. shame u arent using FL studio lol. id wana do a collab any day xD and i never figured reason out (only tried for 10 min)

well nice track man :] 5/5 9/10 (-1 for wierd hardish hats int he start)

mjattie responds:

yea a collab sounds nice, but indeed, that's not possible... I don't think the hi-hats are too sharp in the beginning. Only a bit unrhytmical.

[_I Promise_]

sorry

i cant give you any constructive advise that havent alredy been mentioned. basicaly i just think this is awesome.. theres some level isues and such but its alredy pointed out. i really like the melody and instrument choice, its so great. man, i would wana collab with you xD i could lern allot..

5/5 9/10

vanguard182 responds:

sure man, let me know if you ever start something you wanna collaborate on, just shoot me a pm or something, i'm glad you enjoyed it though

[Plasmic Life View (phy(final]

decent track man

this is pretty good. however i feal that you miss out on some basslines, you also need to mix it a little more maybe cut some middletones off so the compression will be more focused arround the bass kick. also work arround with some reverb and delay ambient effects. composing wise this is great and with those small changes it would be a great trance track.

about the zery bombing retards, i agree wit you there, but unfurtunatly i dont think its going to help.

8/10 4/5

Phyortek responds:

Yeah, Just trying to bring some reason and logic to them :-)

I saved the project and Im still working on it :-)
Compression techniques are somewhat of a weak point in my music, Im working on it still.
Thanks for the review man!

[<MWA> Symmetry]

very very good

i like it.. the composion and the instrument choises are aweseom.. i love your piano parts as always... but.. maybe the lead that comes in together with the piano at first encounter sounds a little too hard maybe.. and when i cranked the volume up the sound was almost too sharp for my ears.. its great wile played at decent low volume but louder it hurts. though the piano is really really soft n great played.

over all a very nice track with a mix of genres which works out wonderfully. though with some room for slight improvements some places.

mjattie responds:

Yea, the sound is sharp... But I want to keep it like this, because everything will sound different if I change it xD You're right about the lead now you mention it xD

Thanks combatplayer for your review.

[<MWA> Trembling]

....

i cant say anything.... atall.... only complain i have would be the " :P " smiles after the sad conclution xD... and maybe it would be a tiny tad better as DnB instead of glich.. but ither way this is amazing..

man... id so wana do a collab with u if ur uing FL xD

5/5, 10/10, fave, download.... i think uve bne hit by zeros man.. after 5 sec of the song i was redy to vote 5/5 and aprox. 20 sec i was redy to review with a 10/10.. so i did.. i love this... and i love the sound clips u use... it sounds almost surround sound like.. its so clear and ambient......

mjattie responds:

thanks a lot :) Yea those zeroes keep me away from top 5 :P

[_Drop_]

love your melody

i love your melody dude. its simply amazing... so simple and yet so deep and advanced.. but ur drums anoyed me a little.. thats the reason for the -1 point.

can i have a go on a remix if u still have the flp?

probably wont be R&B tho... but not shure.. can end as anything really..

vanguard182 responds:

sure that'd be cool, i don't have the flp because i made this when i was still using the FL 8 demo, but give me a couple days and i'll get around to reconstructing it for you shouldn't be too hard

[<MWA> Hope Is Gone]

write better music than stories?

you tell stories with your music. and your music is awesome. writing stories and writing music is same thing. just one with words another is with sounds.

awesome track. keep it up ^_~

5/5 10/10

mjattie responds:

well, I guess you're right :P But then I still keep writing music in stead of typing words ;)

Thanks Combatplayer

[Mt.Goat - Nemo RMX]

nice remix

im not a big nightwish fan but i like your remix. its pretty suithing.... id like it even more if it became a totaly trance mix later in the track tho xD

a shame you couldent find the acapella. would fit good.

if you had ben using FL id wana remix your remix xD but well nice one.

9/10 5/5

Danishdragon responds:

Thanks alot :) I made it with help from a midi :P

[Ziende Ben Ik Blind Geworden]

awesome

this track is so awesome. if it became studio recorded and drums a arcustic bass and some strings or so was added i could imagin this in the radio.

shame its not a typical FL track xD.. i would SO try to remix it xD (as i mentioned above... not trancy remix style)..

awesome dude..

5/5 10/10

mjattie responds:

lol, typical fl :P, well thanks