combatplayer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<MWA> Losing Grip]

very very good

i find the hats in the start too sharp. i know they might be meant for that. but i think the result would be better if u turned them a little down plus made them more soft, perhaps with a reverb wuth very very little dry output increasing as it goes and increased the volume slowly towards start along with hardness would also be kinda cool. maybe u could really do allot my just turning the attack rate a tiny little bit down and then turning it back up at drum intruduction. except fort the hats i dont think theres anything else i noticed like that..its an awesome track. shame u arent using FL studio lol. id wana do a collab any day xD and i never figured reason out (only tried for 10 min)

well nice track man :] 5/5 9/10 (-1 for wierd hardish hats int he start)

mjattie responds:

yea a collab sounds nice, but indeed, that's not possible... I don't think the hi-hats are too sharp in the beginning. Only a bit unrhytmical.

[_I Promise_]

sorry

i cant give you any constructive advise that havent alredy been mentioned. basicaly i just think this is awesome.. theres some level isues and such but its alredy pointed out. i really like the melody and instrument choice, its so great. man, i would wana collab with you xD i could lern allot..

5/5 9/10

vanguard182 responds:

sure man, let me know if you ever start something you wanna collaborate on, just shoot me a pm or something, i'm glad you enjoyed it though

[Keshia Angeline - Only You]

perfect

this is the kind of music and quality i listen to in the radio normaly and see in commercials on the televiton. im tankfull that i can listen to it in here for free too. and unfurtunatly this also reminds me of the downside of FL Studio, almost no matter what you do you probably wont ever get this sound qality out of it.. though i use it becaus its easy and fast.

this track blew me away. 10/10 5/5 faved, download and shared with everyone i know.

keep it up man.

[Bubble Bass (PsyHardTrance)]

pretty awesome

you devinatly catches the psy feal with your instrumentation and melody. though i think you could use a little more time on the mixing and mastering, only small things though. and then finaly, its a shame that when what seems only to be the intro is over, the song ends.

[Plasmic Life View (phy(final]

decent track man

this is pretty good. however i feal that you miss out on some basslines, you also need to mix it a little more maybe cut some middletones off so the compression will be more focused arround the bass kick. also work arround with some reverb and delay ambient effects. composing wise this is great and with those small changes it would be a great trance track.

about the zery bombing retards, i agree wit you there, but unfurtunatly i dont think its going to help.

8/10 4/5

Phyortek responds:

Yeah, Just trying to bring some reason and logic to them :-)

I saved the project and Im still working on it :-)
Compression techniques are somewhat of a weak point in my music, Im working on it still.
Thanks for the review man!

[<MWA> Symmetry]

very very good

i like it.. the composion and the instrument choises are aweseom.. i love your piano parts as always... but.. maybe the lead that comes in together with the piano at first encounter sounds a little too hard maybe.. and when i cranked the volume up the sound was almost too sharp for my ears.. its great wile played at decent low volume but louder it hurts. though the piano is really really soft n great played.

over all a very nice track with a mix of genres which works out wonderfully. though with some room for slight improvements some places.

mjattie responds:

Yea, the sound is sharp... But I want to keep it like this, because everything will sound different if I change it xD You're right about the lead now you mention it xD

Thanks combatplayer for your review.

[Sleeping sun piano (demo)]

hmmm..

i dont know the original. so i dont know how its suposed to sound. but though i will agree with the dudes below me that u need some pads and some more 'umph' (whatever that means) ^_^''

though i also think that if you played some more keys on the same time it would seem more alive.. depending on the software you use, a few pads or maybe soft drum clip would be going good with it too. maybe a less solid rythm in the piano mellody n then form that rythm with some other instruments or a deeper note on the piano itself.

and then maybe another piano sound or just some tweeking on the one u use now.

i dont know if thats the sound you're looking for but i think it would sound nice..
think it would remind a lil bout the piano track of mine i noticed in ur fave list lol.. (sorry for seming stalk'ish lol)

well botom line. i think this could be great with some work.

[<MWA> Trembling]

....

i cant say anything.... atall.... only complain i have would be the " :P " smiles after the sad conclution xD... and maybe it would be a tiny tad better as DnB instead of glich.. but ither way this is amazing..

man... id so wana do a collab with u if ur uing FL xD

5/5, 10/10, fave, download.... i think uve bne hit by zeros man.. after 5 sec of the song i was redy to vote 5/5 and aprox. 20 sec i was redy to review with a 10/10.. so i did.. i love this... and i love the sound clips u use... it sounds almost surround sound like.. its so clear and ambient......

mjattie responds:

thanks a lot :) Yea those zeroes keep me away from top 5 :P

[_Drop_]

love your melody

i love your melody dude. its simply amazing... so simple and yet so deep and advanced.. but ur drums anoyed me a little.. thats the reason for the -1 point.

can i have a go on a remix if u still have the flp?

probably wont be R&B tho... but not shure.. can end as anything really..

vanguard182 responds:

sure that'd be cool, i don't have the flp because i made this when i was still using the FL 8 demo, but give me a couple days and i'll get around to reconstructing it for you shouldn't be too hard

[Psybot - Heaven cries 2008]

cheers dude

this is a rare thing in here... a well composed track which is also well mixed and have a good balance of instruments... gratz. u deserve higher rankings than u have...

5/5 10/10